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  1. 4 hours ago, styopa said:

    It really made me start presenting information in games without maps, as much as possible (tactical maps, sure, but I mean the big world maps we all love to draw and look at).

    But that might not necessarily hold true for fantasy settings where plenty of flying creatures or spells could give aerial views of the land.

  2. I was going to say you were wrong then ( as my printed copy of of "Xenomorph" is on "Page 33" ) but I've realised it's because the first released PDF (with the goofs etc.) had stuff from page 15 repeated on page 16 and thus made the PDF a 33 page document.

    Guess I'll have to order a fixed copy...

     

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  3. Just browsing my Lulu copy of Mythras and I realised there are 3 sides of whitespace at the end of the booklet ( because of the multiple of 4 page count for hardcopies ).

    Would it not be a good idea to use up these 3 sides by listing some more creatures? Adding in a few of the standard fantasy tropes ( orc, elf, dwarf, dragon ) and something else sci-fi ( maybe a space marine/stormtrooper analogue )?

  4. @Loz - Hi, I've just had my postie bring my Lulu copy of Imperative but sadly it's got the few goofs and typos in it.

    Have you revised the Lulu PDF internals upload file to the "fixed" version yet, so that if I do a reorder I'll get a "fixed" dead-tree version ?

    Cheers.

     

  5. Investigator Handbook 

    (Print and PDF):

    1. Page 6, first line - the book is called the "Investigators Handbook" <- the "s" should be removed to coincide with all other references to the book title.

    2. Page 176 - title of the table "Period Cars and Trucks" should be in Cthulhu-Cristoforo font ( not the extra curly normal Cristoforo font )

     

    Keeper Rulebook

    1. PDF needs rear cover adding

    2. Page 16, call-out box - 3rd paragraph, 3rd word - "Sectionn" has two "n"s ( affects both Print and PDF )

     

    Both books suggestion:

    Suggest 1st internal page ( with book title and credits ) have both book titles changed to reflect what they are called on the cover and indicia ( and mirroring the cover style ).

    i.e. as attached examples:

    Investigator Handbook Titlepage.pdf

    Keeper Rulebook Titlepage.pdf

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