Page 193 - Description of Infinity rune.
making them invulnerable to almost all magic, among other ability.
should be
making them invulnerable to almost all magic, among other abilities.
Page 208 - Gonn Orta
He was born in the God Time,
It then continues "a native to this region" what "this" is it talking about? The God Time, is that a region?
In the First Age, Gonn Orta lived in Fronela, which then was thinly populated by men.
perhaps better as
In the First Age, Gonn Orta lived in Fronela, which was then thinly populated by men.