BeronTheGrey

Page 227, Four Sacred Breaths Exploit, The Storm Breath: "expand by 1 until" should be "expands by 1 until". Page 228, Spear Riding Trick Exploit, Champion Feat: should the text "You can now target a far away enemy." be in Bold?

Page 226, Catch One Breath Maneuver, Adventurer Feat: should "You can now trigger catch one breath with any miss." text be in bold?

Page 220, Xiola Umbar’s Favor Talent:Epic Feat text "You gain a +1 bonus to saving throws, but that bonus ends until the end of any battle in which an ally fails a death save." This seems to be very clumsy wording; maybe reword it as "You gain a +1 bonus to saving throws. If an ally fails a death save, you lose the bonus until the end of the battle.

Page 201, Summon Sylph spell: the heading Summoned Sylph (7th Level) is repeated twice; the second heading should be Summoned Sylph (9th Level).

Page 198, Heler’s Clan Talent: text "You can’t take this talent if take the Heir of Storm talent" should be "You can’t take this talent if you have taken the Heir of Storm talent".

Page 191, Great Killer’s Leap power: in the Effect text, we have the sentence "The magic of this move lets you jump a much further than you could normally jump." The bolded a seems to be redundant.

Page 191, Gift of the Young Gods power: "9th level power 25 ongoing damage; miss: 15 damage"; should this be "9th level power 25 ongoing damage; miss: 15 ongoing damage"?

Page 189, Class Talents: in the text for Shadow Walk, "or the Beast rune", should there be a Beast rune graphic inserted?

Page 185, Lightning Stroke spell: should this spell have the same "Special: You must be inspired." text as Inspired Strike?

Page 178, Sunrise on Kero Fin Talent, Epic Feat: "If you have the Earth rune as one of your runes are fighting with a shield"; this looks like it's missing the words "and you" just before "are fighting".

Page 176, The Death Gate power: can this power increase your crit range by more than 2 if you hit with multiple attacks this turn?

Page 175, Sever Spirit power: Special text "You must use a sword with this attack; you use your blade to cut at a nearby enemy’s soul . . ."; should the ". . ." be there, or should it just end with a normal "."?

Page 174, Warleader Talent, Epic Feat: you can choose two benefits this battle; this would be better phrased as you can use two warcries this battle.

Page 150, Webbing spell: does the damage on a failed save also increase with level?

Page 140, Summon Earthwave: the 7th and 9th level versions are headed 7th Level Earth Elemental and 9th Level Earth Elemental instead of Earthwave.