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Please post any errors/typos spotted in the RuneQuest Gamemaster Screen Pack to this thread. Please take care to note the page number where you've noticed something!

We'll keep this tribal edit open until September 29th. We'll then review the thread and make any necessary changes to the files before sending to print.

Many thanks!

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Adventure Book, p.12 - why not put the names of the Colymar Kings listed here in bold text, as on p.11? It's the same list, after all.

Adventure Book, p.21 - a surprising number of people were Tribal King from 1613-15 and then 1625 onwards ... Estavor & Dangmet (at lower right) seem to have cut'n'pasted this text from Leika, above them. Dangmet was Tribal King from 1591-98, and Estavos (note spelling) from 1582-1591.

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Adventure Book, p.21 - "Kangharl - Lunar Hostage" is clearly the Kangharl "Blackmoor" who was Tribal King until he got et by a Dragon in 1625, so his name should be marked with a Death Rune, and it would make sense to give his regnal years as "1615-1625", even if you can't stomach calling him a "Tribal King" (which he was, so there). "Kangharl [Death Rune], Lunar Hostage (1615-1625)" might be an acceptable face-saving way to show him on the Taraling dynasty chart, but I'd just list him as a Tribal King. Screw Colymar sensibilities: let's tell the Truth, here.

 

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Adventure Book, p.24 - "The Ballista" - "This composite bow (see above)..." should probably read "(see below)", since there's nothing relevant above, but the full Allied Spirit stats and weapon stats for "The Ballista" are at the bottom of that column of text.

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Adventure Book, the map of Clearwine p.32-33 and "Points and Places" p.34-36 use different numbering schemes. So the Assembly Rock is point 19 on the map and point 1 in the writeup; the Small Walls are 1 on the map and 2 in text; the Earth Temple is 2 and 3; the Blue Mound is 18 and 4; and so forth. Some numbered points in the text aren't on the map (eg: Vineyards); there are 21 numbered points in text and 19 on the map; I could go on for ages, but you can see it for yourself, now. Is it possible to use the same sequence in both places?

 

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Adventure Book, pages 40-41: might it be more straightforward to call the first Demi-bird "Sarna Ya'qal's Demi-bird" (rather than "Demi-bird One"), keeping "Demi-bird One" and "Demi-bird Two" as the names for the mounts of (nameless) Beaked Dragonewts One & Two?

 

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Adventure Book, p.47 - strange capitalisation in the header for RedEye the Boar, it's gone all HarperCollins (should be "Redeye" as in the rest of the text).

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Adventure Book, p.50, Stream Vale (last sentence): "... only once the Colymar recognized the duck's claims ..." should be "... the ducks' claims ..."

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Adventure Book, p.55, Lismelder / Hillhaven: "They have a long tradition of powerful Kolatings and has made many pacts..." should be "... and have made many pacts ..."

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Did you mean to have the Apple Lane graphic from pp70-71 included in the supplemental file called map of Apple Lane? Just as you have with Clearwine graphic which is on two pages in the booklet and in the separate file presented as a single image. If not can we make a request that you do, as it would be really handy

 

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Adventurer Book, p.60, Courtesan skill: "Courtesans are skilled professional craftspersons whose tools are the human body and it's associated senses" - should be "... and its associated senses."

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18 minutes ago, Rick Meints said:

We uploaded a new and properly paginated Artisan Character sheet to Chaosium.com and DTRPG.

I see that Knowledge skills have been squeezed into the available space as well. Nice. Not many needed two Cult Lores and three Homeland Lores anyway!

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Adventure Book, p.87, Appease Earth Rune spell (last sentence): "No characteristic may be increased upon the normal maximum by this means" should be "... above the normal maximum ..." (checked wording vs. Bestiary and confirmed).

 

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Adventure Book, p.89 - it's not technically an error, but the word-for-word duplication of the "Thane of Apple Lane" paragraph as the first bullet of Option Two is kinda annoying.

In the penultimate paragraph on this page, suggest adding: " ... asks to meet with adventurers with a high Loyalty (Sartar)" or "... a high Loyalty to Sartar" - either would be better than "... with a high Loyalty Sartar."

 

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