BeronTheGrey

Page 227, Four Sacred Breaths Exploit, The Storm Breath: "expand by 1 until" should be "expands by 1 until".

Page 228, Spear Riding Trick Exploit, Champion Feat: should the text "You can now target a far away enemy." be in Bold?

Page 226, Catch One Breath Maneuver, Adventurer Feat: should "You can now trigger catch one breath with any miss." text be in bold?

Page 220, Xiola Umbar’s Favor Talent:Epic Feat text "You gain a +1 bonus to saving throws, but that bonus ends until the end of any battle in which an ally fails a death save."

This seems to be very clumsy wording; maybe reword it as "You gain a +1 bonus to saving throws. If an ally fails a death save, you lose the bonus until the end of the battle.

Page 201, Summon Sylph spell: the heading Summoned Sylph (7th Level) is repeated twice; the second heading should be Summoned Sylph (9th Level).

Page 198, Heler’s Clan Talent: text "You can’t take this talent if take the Heir of Storm talent" should be "You can’t take this talent if you have taken the Heir of Storm talent".

Page 191, Great Killer’s Leap power: in the Effect text, we have the sentence "The magic of this move lets you jump a much further than you could normally jump."

The bolded a seems to be redundant.

Page 191, Gift of the Young Gods power: "9th level power  25 ongoing damage; miss: 15 damage"; should this be "9th level power  25 ongoing damage; miss: 15 ongoing damage"?

Page 189, Class Talents: in the text for Shadow Walk, "or the Beast rune", should there be a Beast rune graphic inserted?

Page 185, Lightning Stroke spell: should this spell have the same "Special: You must be inspired." text as Inspired Strike?

Page 178, Sunrise on Kero Fin Talent, Epic Feat: "If you have the Earth rune as one of your runes are fighting with a shield"; this looks like it's missing the words "and you" just before "are fighting".

Page 176, The Death Gate power: can this power increase your crit range by more than 2 if you hit with multiple attacks this turn?

Page 175, Sever Spirit power: Special text "You must use a sword with this attack; you use your blade to cut at a nearby enemy’s soul . . ."; should the ". . ." be there, or should it just end with a normal "."?

Page 174, Warleader Talent, Epic Feat: you can choose two benefits this battle; this would be better phrased as you can use two warcries this battle.

Page 150, Webbing spell: does the damage on a failed save also increase with level?

Page 140, Summon Earthwave: the 7th and 9th level versions are headed 7th Level Earth Elemental and 9th Level Earth Elemental instead of Earthwave.

Page 139, Slam Attacks text box: this should be on the previous page if possible, as it refers to the summoned Earth Elemental.

Page 137, Summon Sawtooth Python: shouldn't this spell have an entry for Champion Feat (Mother of Beasts)?

Page 125, Earth Power Spell: should the attach bonus for an unstaggered target be doubled or tripled, or just the damage bonus?

Page 124, Keeper of Spirits Talent: in the text "In addition, minor earth spirits you summon with using summon minor guardian don’t cost you any hit points.", the bolded word "with" seems to be redundant.

Page 110, Roaring Return special power: the Champion Feat text reads "The recovery is now a free."

This should probably read either "The recovery is now free." or "The recovery is now a free recovery."

Page 108, Die Power The Bloody Facts: the text "One-battle Berserker Die Power" should be in bold.

Page 105, 4th paragraph under heading The Storm Bull Berserker Die: reference to Wild Frenzy Talent in sentence "Normally we don’t have to spell that out, but
there would be some enticing exploitations of talents like Wild Frenzy if we didn’t clear this up from the start."

This should probably be Blood Frenzy talent.

Page 100, the Berserker Talent One Breath: in the epic feat description, the infinity rune in the sentence "There are epic powers that get you rolling" is misplaced.

Page 99, the Berserker Talent Clanging Shield: do you automatically get the die power Shield Chewer, or do you need to choose it as one of your powers?