Apologies if I'm missing something but
p.18 states that Joreen, "makes it to the top with her ally, Kana"; and also that Kana is "allied/tied with Joreen and arrives with her"
doesn't this contradict information at p.14, Joreen "her hatred for the Lunar people blinds her—she immediately suspects any Lunar of maliciousness, and actively resents Kana’s inclusion in the Bonding Ceremony.", and p.9 describes how Joreen's "hatred against Lunars combined with the humiliation of losing sees her commit Sabotage... against Kana later that night"
Maybe change p.18 to "makes it to the top just after her rival, Kana"?
