Thanks very much for your kind words.
I will certainly try to take your advice on board, especially your points about the Stat Blocks bleeding over onto a second page. Originally, I had placed the maps and some artwork in the white areas, but had some difficulties around this and finally opted to remove the artwork and to PDF the maps separately.
I guess that I am maybe a bit guilty of not knowing when to stop writing. I wanted to build character into the NPCs and several paragraphs on appearance, personality, motivation and tactical nous soon takes up space.
Regarding the cults and the weapon descriptions. I had assumed that anyone who was interested would have a familiarity with the World of Xoth. All of those things are described in the Spider God's Bride (except for the weapon Yataghan) and I didn't want to be upsetting Morten or MGP by cut and pasting the cults from their intellectual property.
The Maps should also be on the site at Xoth.net publishing under separate PDFs. I'll check the site again, in case they have been removed. They are extremely amateurish, but should have enough to go on.
Once again, thanks for taking the time to peruse them and comment. I really appreciate it.