tgcb Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 (edited) Page 18 - Note 11 doesn’t end in a . (period) Page 20/22 Barbarian and Civilized: both have Professional Skills end in period but no other sections do Page 23 Nomadic - Standard skills ends in a period Page 24 - Primitive - Standard and Professional end in period (basically saying you're not consistent with your periods) Page 26 - “event” is lower case in 1st paragraph but upper case in 2nd paragraph Page 37 - style gripe - if the “Next Steps” text box was a little wider you would have to abbreviate so much within it Can I ask some questions: 1) is this helping or am I wasting my time? 2) if this is helping, what is the "deadline" to get these in the new hardcover? 3) should I put these here and on the Design Mechanism site? (or is just here OK) 4) should I put them in 1 post instead of posting as I find them? 5) do I get my non-human starting age chart if I post enough of them? Edited July 24, 2013 by tgcb Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lawrence.whitaker Posted July 24, 2013 Share Posted July 24, 2013 To answer your questions... 1) is this helping or am I wasting my time? No, it helps. 2) if this is helping, what is the "deadline" to get these in the new hardcover? You have 14 days. 3) should I put these here and on the Design Mechanism site? (or is just here OK) Neither. PM me. 4) should I put them in 1 post instead of posting as I find them? One post. 5) do I get my non-human starting age chart if I post enough of them? No. Quote The Design Mechanism: Publishers of Mythras Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tgcb Posted July 24, 2013 Author Share Posted July 24, 2013 (edited) 5) do I get my non-human starting age chart if I post enough of them? No. Ah...so, I'm going to take a wild stab and say I shouldn't plan on a co-writing credit (since I can't even get a chart included ). PS- I'll try to read faster to meet the deadline Edited July 24, 2013 by tgcb Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tgcb Posted July 28, 2013 Author Share Posted July 28, 2013 PM sent. Burned through the pages- looking mostly for style, etc. PS- lots of good/great information in those pages - much more than I realized when I was just jumping around looking at it originally Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lawrence.whitaker Posted July 28, 2013 Share Posted July 28, 2013 PM sent. Burned through the pages- looking mostly for style, etc. PS- lots of good/great information in those pages - much more than I realized when I was just jumping around looking at it originally Got it - many thanks. The bulk of its is stylistic. Some is easy to do, some is POV-based, and some can't be changed easily, or has been done that way for a reason. However, good work, and thank you again. Quote The Design Mechanism: Publishers of Mythras Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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