Ep 4 - List of Possible Corrections

[morganhua]

p. 5, col 2, para 7, line 3. (typo) "Matherson stays behind at the farmhouse to set up of his laboratory and to study the mi-go slime."  "of his" should be "her"

Inconsistency, p.9 says Emelda isn't home and p.10 says that she is.

• p. 9, col 2, para 2, lines 10-13. "Unfortunately, Jethro’s bereaved wife, Emelda Cratchett, has been out of town the last few days making arrangements to move in with some relatives."
• p. 10, col 2, para 3, lines 1-2. "An attractive woman in a conservative black dress greets those knocking... Emelda..."

Edited July 22, 2016 by morganhua

[Mike M]

Thanks Morgan

p9 - means to say: that Emelda 'has' been out of town recently - but has now returned. The intent is correct but the sentence needs to be clearer - good spot!