SaintMeerkat
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p. 113, Column 2, Lyle Bentley Traits -- Should be "an overconfident and..."
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p. 68, Column 1, Paragraph 2 -- The Baptist church doesn't call their worship service a mass, so it should be something like "During a Christmas Eve Candlelight Service,"
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p. 113-115 -- Lyle Bentley, Tony Tedesco, and Dana Hopster are missing Pulp Adjustments.
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p. 113, Column 1 - Isabella Pérez is missing a Pulp Talent from her Pulp Adjustments.
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p. 112, Column 2, Paragraph 4 (Isabella Pérez) -- Should be "...the Sedecim. In fact,..."
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p. 111, Column 1, Paragraph 1, Sentence 2 -- Should be "...large black eyes, and skin..." (for clarity)
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p. 106, Column 1, Paragraph 2, Sentence 1 -- Should be "...new treatment. Hooking up..."
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p. 104, Column 2, Paragraph 3, Sentence 2 -- Should be "...Seidman had been expected..."
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p. 104, Left margin, Illustration label -- Should be "Exposé on the..."
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p. 104, Column 1, Paragraph 1, Sentence 1 -- Should be "...required skill sets."
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p. 103, Column 2, Paragraph 2, Sentence 2 -- Should be "...that was a living..." (missing word)
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p. 102, Column 2, Paragraph 2, Sentence 1 -- Should be "further "deep-state meditations"
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p. 102 -- Column 1, Paragraph 2, Sentence 6 -- Should be "That is, until... (add comma)
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p. 98, Column 2, Paragraph 5, Sentence 3 -- Should be "...although she gives..." (missing word)
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p. 97, Column 1, Larry Conner's stat block is missing Pulp Adjustments.
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p. 97, Column 1, Larry Conner Traits -- Should be "sudden bouts of violence..."
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p. 96, Column 1, Dorothy Waite's Pulp Adjustments -- Dorothy is missing a Pulp Talent.
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p. 95, Column 1, F. Murray Gilman's Pulp Adjustments -- Mr. Gilman is missing a Pulp Talent.
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p. 94, F. Murray Gilman's Combat Section - Both Classic and Pulp Entries should say "see above"
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p. 93, Column 1, Robert Marsh Combat Section -- after Cthulhu's Kiss damage listing, it should say "see above" EDIT: It occurs again in the Pulp Combat section.
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p. 93, Column 1, Robert Marsh Traits -- Should be "...upon his guest, like a snake..." (remove extra word)
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p. 92, Column 1, Paragraph 1, Sentence 2 -- Should be "...there were still..."
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p. 91, Column 1, Paragraph 3, Sentence 1 -- Should be "those nearing the change into deep ones..."
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p. 86, Column 2, Paragraph 2, Sentence 4 -- need commas after First and finally because they are items in a sequence. "First, the Congregationalist church... and finally, the Baptist..."
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p. 84, Column 2, Paragraph 6, Sentence 2 -- Should be "...neighboring islands..."
