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  1. SaintMeerkat
    p. 260, Column 2, Paragraph 6, Sentence 5 - should be "These monsters' profiles..."
  2. SaintMeerkat
    p. 260, Column 2, Paragraph 2, Sentence 2 -- should be "snakelike structure"
  3. SaintMeerkat
    p. 258, left margin, map label -- should be "Elder Things map"
  4. SaintMeerkat
    p. 257, Column 2, Paragraph 3, Sentence 3 -- should be "would travel farther..."
  5. SaintMeerkat
    p. 255, Column 1, Paragraph 3, Sentence 1 - should be "by 6 m" (missing space)
  6. SaintMeerkat
    p. 254, Column 2, Paragraph 6, Sentence 1 -- "Keen-eyed" should be hyphenated.
  7. SaintMeerkat
    p. 254, Column 2, Paragraph 4, Sentence 3 -- should be "nothing to breathe...".
  8. SaintMeerkat
    EDIT: Since this thread is for reporting errors, and not for debating grammar issues or editorial policies, I am going to limit my further comments to just errors.
  9. SaintMeerkat
    p. 252 - Where's My Space Suit Inset - Paragraph 1, Sentence 1 - should probably be "the near vacuum of space..." or "extremely thin atmosphere on the Moon." or something similar. EDIT: There is one more occurrence in paragraph 2.
  10. SaintMeerkat
    p. 251, Handout: Harvest 21 - The lab letterhead should say "Federated Oil & Chemical"
  11. SaintMeerkat
    p. 249, Column 1, Paragraph 1, Sentence 2 -- should be "...never took to military life." The roleplaying hooks section implies that he was a member of the 4th Marines, so "army life" wouldn't be appropriate.
  12. SaintMeerkat
    p. 247, Column 2, Paragraph 4, Sentence 2 -- should be "not for the faint-hearted..."
  13. SaintMeerkat
    p. 244, Column 2, paragraph 3, combat block (Dark Spawn stat block) -- Dodge values should be 40% (20/8)
  14. SaintMeerkat
    p. 244, Column 2, paragraph 2, Sentence 2 (Dark Spawn stat block) -- should probably be "damage equal to at least half" or something similar.
  15. SaintMeerkat
    p. 238, Column 2, Paragraph 2, Sentence 5 -- should be "...returned whence they came."
  16. SaintMeerkat
    p. 236, Column 1, Paragraph 1, Sentence 2 -- Should be "young stand on either side..."
  17. SaintMeerkat
    p. 98, Column 1, Paragraph 3, Sentence 5 -- Should be "A successful Spot Hidden roll notices..."
  18. SaintMeerkat
    p. 218, Column 2, Alexandru Cuzra stat block -- damage for the 12-g shotgun (2B) should be 4D6/2D6/1D6
  19. SaintMeerkat
    p.212, Column 1, paragraph 6 & 7 -- change discs to disks to match usage in the rest of the document (2 occurrences)
  20. SaintMeerkat
    p. 212, Column 1, Paragraph 2, Sentence 1 -- should be "Keeper is at liberty..."
  21. SaintMeerkat
    Page 210, Column 2, Paragraph 3, Sentence 2 -- should be "give the investigators a bit..."
  22. SaintMeerkat
    p. 197, FOC Weapons Table, lower half of page - Malfunction should be 100 for .303 Rifle, Colt .45 Revolver, and Very Pistol.
  23. SaintMeerkat
    p. 191, Father Maxime Dubois Stat Block - Weapon damage for the 1B shotgun is missing medium and long range damage (Classic & Pulp).
  24. SaintMeerkat
    p. 184 - Column 1, Paragraph 5, Sentence 2 - should be "and the rest of the Vermont team..."
  25. SaintMeerkat
    p. 181 - Column 1, Paragraph 3, Sentence 2 - single-barreled should be hyphenated.
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