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p. 176 - Column 1, Paragraph 2, Sentence 2 - should be "three down-and-outs sitting on the stair" p. 176 - Column 1, Paragraph 2, Sentence 4 - should be "Hello, brother. Go on inside if you're looking for a place to stay."
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p. 168 - Handout 16a, Page 1, Dialogue Line/Entry 10 - Mountain should be lower case. Line/Entry 13 - Should be "....let's get back to the questions. Shall we?" p. 169 - Handout 16a, Page 2, Dialogue Line/Entry 5 - Missing space after colon, before "Ninth planet..."
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p. 148, column 1, Robert Tunes stat block - Mist projector damage should be 1D10 (Classic & Pulp).
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p. 128, Handout: Harvest 11 - Paragraph 1, Sentence 1 - Current academic practice is that elements are not capitalized, so pasquallium should probably start with a lower case p. Learmonth is a celebrated and well regarded metallurgist; he would probably be familiar with that convention.
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p. 111, Column 1, Zoog stat block is missing space after the Stealth skill.
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p. 110, column 2, spell section in standard Mi-Go stat block doesn't match the spell section on p.24. p.110 p. 24
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p. 108, Column 2, Richard Wendell stat block labels should be in bold.
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p. 101, Column 1, Paragraph 2, Sentence 4 - A chimneystack is the portion of the chimney that extends ABOVE the roof line, so it should just say chimney.
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p. 95 - Column 2, Paragraph 3, Sentence 1 - Should be reaches.
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p. 94 - Column 2, Paragraph 1, Sentence 3 - Should be have rather than has.
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p. 94 - Handout: Harvest 7 - Paragraph 1, Sentence 4 - Root should be capitalized.
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p, 88 - Column 2, Paragraph 2 - a mineral this region of Vermont is well known for. Should be - "a mineral for which this region of Vermont is well known."
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p. 88 - lower left illustration label - should be Serpentinite. Here is a screenshot of the pertinent Wikipedia entry.
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p. 63 - Column 2, paragraph 3. Weilding should be wielding.
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p. 57 - Index of Buildings at bottom. Entry 39 should be Walgreens instead of Walgreen's. Also, at this time in their history, it looks they just used Walgreen without the s at the end. The founder's name was Charles Walgreen.
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p. 52 - bottom left illustration label has typo. Should be Rydell instead of Rydel.
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p. 24 - Second column Mi-Go Soldier Armor says "minimum possible damage." All the other armor entries for Mi-Go types just say "minimum damage."
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P. 4 - Last line at bottom of Mi Go illustration says Courtesty instead of Courtesy
