SaintMeerkat
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p. 46, Column 1, Paragraph 5, Sentence 1 -- Should be "possess "Cthulhu's Blessing" In all of the stat blocks, it's plural (Cthulhu's Blessings), so you may want to change it here, too, for the sake of consistency.
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p. 51, Column 1, Paragraph 3 (Finlay Harden's Description) -- Should be "His eyes have a tired sadness..."
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p. 46, Column 2, Paragraph 2, Sentence 1 -- Should be "Currently, membership..."
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p. 46, Column 1, Paragraph 3, Sentence 1 -- Should be "London's high society..." (no capitals)
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p. 40, Column 1, Paragraph 3, Sentence 5 -- Should be "...membership in the Freemasons."
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p. 38, Column 2, Paragraph 4, Sentence 2 -- Should be "...with his return. However, when..."
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p. 34, Right margin, Illustration label -- No period at the end of "artwork"
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p. 31, Column 1, Paragraph 2, Sentence 2 -- Should be "...as the carnival moved..."
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p. 30, Column 2, Paragraph 2 -- Indent paragraph
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p. 28, Column 2, Paragraph 1, Sentence 2 -- Should be "...received from Eberhart by A.C. Nightly,"
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There is a problem with the cover that I can't reproduce on my desktop. On my iPad, the logo looks partially obscured and is in a different location, but on my desktop it looks fine. iPad Pro (9.7") OS 15.1 (Goodreader v.5.11.1162) Windows 10 Desktop (Adobe Acrobat Reader DC v. 2021.007.20099)
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p. 27, Column 1, Paragraph 2, Sentence 2 -- Should "...possessed, for which they had little use."
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p. 25, Column 1, Paragraph 7, Sentence 3 -- Should be "...former husbands die..." (no apostrophe)
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p. 24, Column 1, Paragraph 2, Sentence 2 -- Should be "One day, the Sleeping...
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p. 22, Left margin, Illustration label -- No period at the end of "Victorian Encyclopedia"
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p. 19, Right margin, Illustration Label -- No period at the end of "16th century manuscript"
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p. 19, Column 1, Paragraph 2, Sentence 1 -- Should be "what is now western Florida,"
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p. 11, Column 1, Paragraph 3, Sentence 2 -- Should be "...doing when seated at a computer."
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p. 368 - Column 1, Paragraph 1, Last Sentence -- should be Lutheran church..."
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p. 281, Dr. Lilian Neill Backstory section (2 errors) -- should be "Prof. Neill" and "Du Bois" EDIT: I finished my read-through. I didn't find anything else.
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p. 276 - Father Cloutier Description -- "clean-shaven" should be hyphenated
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p. 276, Father Cloutier Stat Block, Combat section -- Brawl damage should be 1D3+1D4
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p. 276 - Father Cloutier Skills - Half values for Occult, Persuade, and Psychology should be 27, not 22.
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p. 272, Column 1, Paragraph 1, Augury spell -- should be "to tea leaves,"
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p. 263, bottom half of page, illustration label -- should be "Escaping the Elder Thing city" or "Escaping the City of Elder Things"
