SaintMeerkat Posted December 29, 2021 Share Posted December 29, 2021 p. 84, Column 2, Paragraph 6, Sentence 2 -- Should be "...neighboring islands..." Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintMeerkat Posted December 29, 2021 Share Posted December 29, 2021 (edited) p. 86, Column 2, Paragraph 2, Sentence 4 -- need commas after First and finally because they are items in a sequence. "First, the Congregationalist church... and finally, the Baptist..." Edited December 29, 2021 by SaintMeerkat Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintMeerkat Posted December 29, 2021 Share Posted December 29, 2021 p. 91, Column 1, Paragraph 3, Sentence 1 -- Should be "those nearing the change into deep ones..." Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintMeerkat Posted December 29, 2021 Share Posted December 29, 2021 p. 92, Column 1, Paragraph 1, Sentence 2 -- Should be "...there were still..." Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintMeerkat Posted December 29, 2021 Share Posted December 29, 2021 p. 93, Column 1, Robert Marsh Traits -- Should be "...upon his guest, like a snake..." (remove extra word) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintMeerkat Posted December 29, 2021 Share Posted December 29, 2021 (edited) p. 93, Column 1, Robert Marsh Combat Section -- after Cthulhu's Kiss damage listing, it should say "see above" EDIT: It occurs again in the Pulp Combat section. Edited December 29, 2021 by SaintMeerkat Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintMeerkat Posted December 29, 2021 Share Posted December 29, 2021 p. 94, F. Murray Gilman's Combat Section - Both Classic and Pulp Entries should say "see above" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintMeerkat Posted December 29, 2021 Share Posted December 29, 2021 p. 95, Column 1, F. Murray Gilman's Pulp Adjustments -- Mr. Gilman is missing a Pulp Talent. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintMeerkat Posted December 29, 2021 Share Posted December 29, 2021 p. 96, Column 1, Dorothy Waite's Pulp Adjustments -- Dorothy is missing a Pulp Talent. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintMeerkat Posted December 29, 2021 Share Posted December 29, 2021 p. 97, Column 1, Larry Conner Traits -- Should be "sudden bouts of violence..." Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintMeerkat Posted December 29, 2021 Share Posted December 29, 2021 p. 97, Column 1, Larry Conner's stat block is missing Pulp Adjustments. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintMeerkat Posted December 29, 2021 Share Posted December 29, 2021 p. 98, Column 2, Paragraph 5, Sentence 3 -- Should be "...although she gives..." (missing word) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintMeerkat Posted December 29, 2021 Share Posted December 29, 2021 p. 102 -- Column 1, Paragraph 2, Sentence 6 -- Should be "That is, until... (add comma) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintMeerkat Posted December 29, 2021 Share Posted December 29, 2021 p. 102, Column 2, Paragraph 2, Sentence 1 -- Should be "further "deep-state meditations" Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintMeerkat Posted December 29, 2021 Share Posted December 29, 2021 p. 103, Column 2, Paragraph 2, Sentence 2 -- Should be "...that was a living..." (missing word) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintMeerkat Posted December 29, 2021 Share Posted December 29, 2021 p. 104, Column 1, Paragraph 1, Sentence 1 -- Should be "...required skill sets." Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintMeerkat Posted December 29, 2021 Share Posted December 29, 2021 p. 104, Left margin, Illustration label -- Should be "Exposé on the..." Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintMeerkat Posted December 29, 2021 Share Posted December 29, 2021 p. 104, Column 2, Paragraph 3, Sentence 2 -- Should be "...Seidman had been expected..." Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintMeerkat Posted December 29, 2021 Share Posted December 29, 2021 p. 106, Column 1, Paragraph 2, Sentence 1 -- Should be "...new treatment. Hooking up..." Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintMeerkat Posted December 29, 2021 Share Posted December 29, 2021 p. 111, Column 1, Paragraph 1, Sentence 2 -- Should be "...large black eyes, and skin..." (for clarity) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintMeerkat Posted December 29, 2021 Share Posted December 29, 2021 p. 112, Column 2, Paragraph 4 (Isabella Pérez) -- Should be "...the Sedecim. In fact,..." Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintMeerkat Posted December 29, 2021 Share Posted December 29, 2021 p. 113, Column 1 - Isabella Pérez is missing a Pulp Talent from her Pulp Adjustments. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintMeerkat Posted December 29, 2021 Share Posted December 29, 2021 p. 113-115 -- Lyle Bentley, Tony Tedesco, and Dana Hopster are missing Pulp Adjustments. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintMeerkat Posted December 29, 2021 Share Posted December 29, 2021 p. 68, Column 1, Paragraph 2 -- The Baptist church doesn't call their worship service a mass, so it should be something like "During a Christmas Eve Candlelight Service," Â Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaintMeerkat Posted December 29, 2021 Share Posted December 29, 2021 p. 113, Column 2, Lyle Bentley Traits -- Should be "an overconfident and..." Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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